Daily Work

Layout Sins

Background is way too much clutter/colorful and takes away from the readability
A lot of clutter and slightly stair stepping
Diagonal Lines
Calendar does not stand out enough
Choice of Font style makes it very tough to read with the picture they chose to use.
Small Font Size/Tough to Read

Layout Sins

At least 3 different fonts, all in caps, words are centered.
Used two different justifications, bad bullets,
Busy background, cluttered around the center, too many logos.
Too much waisted space, cluttered in the corners,
Multiple different fonts, tacky heading, too cluttered.
Cluttered around the sides, multiple fonts, text seems to be in stair stepping formation.

Cluttered page
Tacky type and bulky boxes
Centered and tacky type
Tacky type, all centered and cluttered
Busy background and cluttered
Tacky type and cluttered

Flyers

Layout Sins

This one is by FAR the worst one I’ve seen and here’s why.
1. TACKY fonts
2. Warped/Naked Photos
3. Too many fonts
4. Busy background
5. Um… whats with the massive white borders?
This is the Elevator Inspection Notice in McKnight Hall.
1. Centered
2. Tacky Font, not legible in all caps
3.Bulky Border
4. Negative space
5. The important info at the bottom (bad hierarchy) has tight leading
1. TOO WORDY.
2. Hierarchy is hard to navigate as well
3. Red font on yellow background is not pleasing
4. The second paragraph is so small I couldn’t read it in person
Another elevator oopsie
1. The directions being split into two columns makes it difficult to navigate and confusing to read.

1. Centered
2. Not diggin’ the font choice here… not a sin just don’t love it.
3. Four corners… The sponsor logos could be organized at the bottom of the flyer
4. Bulky borders… also ugly.
5. Not really a widow/orphan but “Wichita Proud” being split is confusing to read
6. The boxes around Wichita and Proud are not centered. Too much negative space in the proud box.
1. Busy background
2. Tacky fonts

Layout sins

This has way too much going one, and not enough space.


This one has stair stepping going on.
The boarder on this one is breaking the bulky boarder rule.
Fonts going every which way not allowing you to focus on the main point.
Bulky boarder,Right alignment,and VERY busy.
Too much negative space.

Layout Sins

This poster the art used for the word ‘Holi” is very distracting and hard to read. It actually covers some of the letters below.
The yellow “brushstroke” on this poster looks out of place and distracts from the point of the poster. The font used is also not very enticing.
There are too many words on this poster which almost no one will take the time to read. Not easy to understand the point the poster is trying to advertise.

Layout Sins